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Scenes of mutilation,
Sends chills, scares the nation,
Minds thought: "preservation",
In vein, your conservation.

Be still, these scenes of horror,
Yet we still see more and more,
Leaving us, broken, sore.
Behold: the breaking law,

Propaganda is their tactic,
In a world, color; chromatic,
Everything, stuck, and static,
Break away, see colors fantastic.
©2009 =memroch
:iconmemroch:

Author's Comments

i wrote this about those crappy warning advertisements against smoking, tanning, drugs etc.

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:iconrazaugg:
Interesting. I like the rhyming, but the scheme seems lost in the second stanza. You should try to make it consistent throughout. I like the idea of not conforming to everything you hear. I don't necessarily agree with the present application, but breaking away from the pack is something everyone needs to do.
:iconmiserycat:
Awesome, I like it :3

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"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout 'Save us!' And I'll look down, and whisper 'no.'" - Rorschach's Journal. October 12th, 1985.
:iconmemroch:
i was high :weed:

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"They must find it hard, those who have taken authority as truth, rather than truth as authority"-Gerald Massy [link]
Aren't all the healthy people going to feel stupid, lying in a hospital bed... dying of nothing...
:iconemoandfriends:
Spell colour correctly and you have a favourite. ;P

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#v3g3m1t3 - Putting vitamin B in your concentrated yeast extract :D
Catch my 4000 kiriban and win a 3 month subscription! :D
:iconmemroch:
spell check is my only god!

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"They must find it hard, those who have taken authority as truth, rather than truth as authority"-Gerald Massy [link]
Aren't all the healthy people going to feel stupid, lying in a hospital bed... dying of nothing...
:iconpimpinator:
Use British English spellcheck, not US English. I'll fav it, cause it's awesome, just fix that word.
:iconiwantthestars:
impressive, my dear, most impressive

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"sex disguised as love
and
love disguised as sex"
(Thanks to Rebel2206 for the avi!)
:iconmemroch:
thanks :D

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"They must find it hard, those who have taken authority as truth, rather than truth as authority"-Gerald Massy [link]
Aren't all the healthy people going to feel stupid, lying in a hospital bed... dying of nothing...
:iconhatefuldreamer:
lol i like this. very amusing.

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"You can't be creative when you're completely happy."
~ P!nk

"We live in a society of victimization, where people are much more comfortable being victimized than actually standing up for themselves." - Marilyn Manson

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